Dear Important Newspaper Person,
I told you that AC was dangerous, but no one would listen. No, you all had to see the danger for yourselves. You could not just take my word for it. I am Thomas Edison, I know what I am talking about.
Now that you all have seen the danger, you have to agree that AC is far too dangerous to use. Everyone should convert over to my DC system, which is far safer.
The case of John Feaks proves the danger of AC electricity, and proves how little Westinghouse cares about the safety of those that use his product.
From,
Thomas Edison.
Notes
Edison’s Letter:
all of the “experts” have contradicted each other, making it hard for the public to draw its own concluesions
Edison’s article is rather condescending, and seems to state that he will tell his conclusions with out telling how he got to them, because the public is too stupid to understand it
Westinghouse Letter:
November 24, 2008 at 2:11 pm |
Interesting point that you make from Edison’s point of view. This does seem to be the way Edison has been making claims.
November 24, 2008 at 2:15 pm |
Good general point but add details to make your case more convincing
November 24, 2008 at 2:16 pm |
This has a good stance in what Edison was thinking at that time, but it could use a little more detail.
November 24, 2008 at 2:37 pm |
haha this was a good one, I think you captured Edison really well. Just put in some more details and you should be fine.
November 24, 2008 at 2:38 pm |
This is a good view of what Edison believed in, and seems about as passionate as Edison would of put it, but i believe it to be unethical. it is not right for someone to use the death of someone else to promote them self. This is as bad as murdering the person them self. Striking fear into the heart of the reader, is not the way that one should bring forth an argument.
November 24, 2008 at 2:40 pm |
Wow this is a first. I have more then 1 comment on my post. Yay!!!
November 24, 2008 at 2:40 pm |
Good point on why edison believe his system is better, could expand more with details or examples.
November 24, 2008 at 2:41 pm |
I will fix the problems with this, eventually.
November 24, 2008 at 2:44 pm |
Also, fear is a perfectly good method of bringing about the end of an argument.